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Reviews for "[Metallic Nightmare g-R]"

Cool

I'll try to be nice :P
I disliked the melodysynths a lot. The introtune was killing untill that other synth came. I could imagine it being much cooler if you just prompted a PHAT bass-line in there. The drums, it all sounded a little loud. Hey cool drum variations at times!
Spoken of variation, thats one of the strong points of this song. I loved some parts, but some parts were less in comparison to the others. That says more about the good parts than the bad parts though.
Overall I'd suggest using a little less random melodies. Really, that peaky intro synth rules and you should build a track around that, together with a little less layers maybe, and with more emphasis on the bass without the randomness distracting from it.
I hope I explained myself good enough, lol.
4/5, 8/10

ps: u díd a good job, dont forget that

g-r4ve responds:

yeh I had like 3 songs in one... so im sure any of those simpler melodys near the end revolving around that phat bass, would of been better to build a song with.

Good Stuff

Ai
Go on lad not a bad attempt i must say for a first attempt its pretty damn good !

g-r4ve responds:

I think the bass is good... just need to work on the arangement

Nice XD

that was cool i 5'd it =()

g-r4ve responds:

thx =o

This is really good

I like this song a lot...it really has that dark feeling and a tune that gets stuck in your head.... the only thing i didn't like was that you gave everything away too fast. In the the 8th measure you gave everything away like you had everything come in so you had to make some desperate moves in order to keep it from being repetitive. But other than that it was a really good song..... you just gave everything away too quickly.....nice job love the song.

g-r4ve responds:

yeh I realized that... lucky the transitions were fairly good, so it didnt end up all that bad

decent but more trance like than drum'n'bass

i'll give you credit cuz that was actually pretty good espically if u say that was your very first crack at it. im an actual drum'n'bass dj. been doin it for years, and u did better than i did on my first try so congrats and keep up the good work yo.

g-r4ve responds:

thx... tryin to expand my electronic music horizon. DnB is hard :S