Such a sad fate really...
(NOTE: A LITTLE UNNECESSARY STUFF. Only read if interested)
I was simply going through all of the below 1.0 ranked songs to see which beautiful masterpieces were marked down by incompetent listeners (or lack there of), and I came across this one.
(ACTUAL REVIEW)
Now, when first listening to this piece, I was a little thrown by the start, as there was no thrust that would make someone interested (which I suspect is the culprit to your low grade), but listening further, it revealed itself to be much more than that. I personally haven't heard of the original song before, so I am of no census of being biased, so I will try to make this as square as possible.
The music is thoroughly laid out for us and displayed to serenely. The melody is so enchanting as the instruments just flow so nicely with each other. The subtle to abrupt changes in rhythm are set up so sublimely and quite pleasantly put that it nearly reaps into a persons sub-conscience and reveals to them an near innermost secret. I will have to say that at some points the flute feels out of tone, but certainly not to any degree that should put many people off. I personally like more beat in my song, or for purposely mellow song, to have more passion or accent with the instrument playing it, but what is done so far is adequate.
-Final Readings-
Score: 3.70/5 (4/5)
Review: 7.75/10 (8/10)
I think both my personal feeling and my unbiased sentiment is relatively close with one another on this one.