Alright
It was hard to understand in a couple places and the reason your diversity was low was becuase there was really only like 4 different lines and then it looped again. It was alright, there was no rhythym. I know you can do better but whatever. It is a nice little bit of fun to listen to.
There are far more than 4 lines. 12. See below.
Not sure what you mean by a lack of rhythm. The timing of the singing clearly has some thought and whatnot behind it - there may not be any percussion, but I reckon the lyrics do have a rhythm.
I'll admit I skip fractions of a beat hear and there though.
Still, not sure what you meant.
Regardless, thanks for the review! Interesting to hear other folks' thoughts!
Mangosteen: it reigns supreme amongst fruit.
But I can see you don't know mangosteen by your looks.
So I'll try to explain this fruit of insufficient fame to you
So that if fate takes you to the right place, you'lll eat it too.
Now this is how you recognise a mangosteen -
Round shape, dark purple skin and hard green leaves.
This is how you eat this wondrous fruit -
Tear off the leaves and then you look
Inside to check for creepy crawlies
And if there are not any of these
Tear of the skin, find the white white flesh
In your mouth it's so delicious.
Well... lol
You made me laugh, which is something I don't get often from audio. Anyway, great song I guess... good job.
lool
lol this is funny. did you record this yourself? even the title almost ryhmes rofl.and wtf is that guy saying in the backround? oh well, 5/5, nice job on this one xD
-Chiron
All the sounds are either my own voice or me hitting a glass with a spoon. The vocals in the backgrounds are basically just me harmonising. 'Laaa laaa' 'da da do da' and such.
10? Woah - didn't think it was worth that!
Glad you enjoyed it!