Freaky
This flash movie is friggin freaky, but im not sure if the movie really ends when the 2 eyes fling wide open. For me, it just did, and i didn't hear anything either. But when the eyes flinged open, it LOOKED as if the eyes were getting closer to the mirror, but they didn't... fucking freaky.
Neat...
I liked this one, it´s not that hard to understand, you just have to watch it a few times. Superb work, anyways, looking forward to your next work.
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the animation was nice
i really liked some of the effects u through in too (i.e. when she collapses while standing on that cliff thing and it goes dark....very cool)
but certain parts got a little hectic and u couldn't follow along
other wise it was great
Pros and cons...
...while I think you have a nice style, it was kind of jarbled. I know your intentions, but I don't think you pulled it off well. The main problem I have is that there is no closure; you have this girl crying, yada yada, and there's blood everywhere, but there is no definitive point. Did she witness a murder? Did she kill someone? Et cetera... whenever one tries to do a psychological piece, it's always nice to let the audience know why, adds to the intensity. Other than that, it was nicely done.
p.s. You shouldn't be a dick to Tijo221 just because he expressed his opinion. Not everyone who watches your stuff is going to be a fan; you have to take the good with the bad.
first of all, i was joking in my response to tijo, although an unintelligent review deserves an unintelligent response. your comment has a point, and i understand what you're saying about closure. it was however an experimental peice, and wasn't meant to have any story or definite point, only to convey some emotion and practice flash. doesn't make it any better in that respect, but it is what it is.
Good Job but Animation was Too Messy
Nice Flash. My only problems were that there was no pre-loader and the animation was WAYYYY too jumbled, especially at times when you add extra colors and lines in there. That factor made me close this early, so 2/5, clean it up a little.