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Reviews for "MGS: Shopping"

Some Suggestions

Good stuff. Nice animation ("cute") and storyline. Good overall job!

- I noticed that your animation completely lacks shading. There some basic gradients but nothing more. Add some realistic shading.

- Although the head (especially the eyes) were hilariously big, it takes away from the rest of the motion in the body when it is tweened. So I would reduce the head size.

- Add background music, oh and the sound effect were pretty good and well placed.

Keep it up, muchacho.

Oh and please, please don't do another Zelda Flash... I can't tell you how old those have become.

MetalMaverick responds:

The head size thing is done on purpose mainly to better express the characters emotions, so I'm not sure if I should reduce it. As for the Zelda flash, I think you'll like the idea I have planned for it.

Good ..

This movie was VERY small (in filesize I mean!)
You seem to be a stickler for small coding like me. :)

Okay, MGS, there are a TON of things that could be done. Consider:

1. PLEASE add real voices when he is using the communicator. 2meg files aren't going to hurt me.

2. Add the horizontal line animation in the communicator, parodies could be the chief is caught knickering one of the girls when he tunes in.

3. The knocking was good. You are VERY WELCOME to use any and all of the sound effects from the PSX game including. "What was that?" "Return To Your Positions," etc. It would add to the parody. ESPECIALLY if you could duplicate the voices with new messages like "I SAID RETURN TO YOUR POSITIONS YOU TWITS!"

4. Camera-work. Use a really cool 3-D camera that flies all around snake to look hi-tech and then bumps into Snake, ouch.

5. There were no heat-goggle scenes. Further there were no guards wearing the face-masks. Accidentally removing a face mask reveals a CUTE girl and Snake can't kill her despite the chief yelling at him for that. :)

6. No bosses. There were a lot of bosses in MGS.
the Sharpshooter accidentally brings his kid's dart gun, the Huntress could "mark" Snake a different way. }:> There are many possibilities.

7. Snake needs to get Jiggy with Mai Lin (call her Lai-Mi) the Save-Girl. She was cute as a button with just as many curves in the game and EVERYONE would like to see that. :D

8. The box scene was good with him trying to get away with the Animal Crackers. Have some scenes with Snake crawling on the ground, he did that a lot.

9. There was a POV for each of the guards, showing that in real-life would be funny as hell where they beam a green eye-cone down a corridor like something from Locutis of BORG. Even have Snake approach one guard until right on top of him just staying 1 pixel out of the cone to show how ridiculous their vision is.

There are many possibilities.
Keep up the great work ! :)

David

Milk Lighter Fluid And One Of Those Large Animal

Crackers! Funny But Short Still Funny THou! Cuz I Cant Even Make A Single Flash!

it's ok but..

it's a little bit bulgy eyed.. but it's ok..

wth..

He didnt even get his groceries. Sadness.