Not bad for a first work
I dont really understand what the hell it was about.. but i still kinda liked it. Especially since it was anime-style ^_^. You should speed it up a little, and put some fitting music under it.
Ill be waiting for the sequel ^_^
Hopeful all will become clear as the story progresses. The story should move a bit faster now, 1 movie
= 1 of my comics. No#2 will have better animation...I hope and more fighting in it. If you would like to email me I can elaborate more on things you don't understand about this movie. Thanks
Jason "Danthi" Whalley
You're off to a good start
You should try to add more sounds - don't leave so much silence. You may want to keep working on making your animation smoother. I had a hard time following the story line, but that could be because this is like a teaser. <?> BUT... The drawings themselves are very good. You have a neat anime-type style. The idea is cool. I love vampires! <see my profile> As soon as you kind of work out those few kinks you'll be making a really cool series. Good luck! :)
Thanks for your review. I have not done a lot of frame b frame animation before so I will work on it and add some more. This is the actual movie. I will ad some more once I find some more and fix the voices as well. I will work on making my animation smother, for the walking I rendered a walking movie in poser and imported it in to flash and I traced over that for the movement of the arms and legs. I hope to make it on the top 50 movie of all time or even have a page for my series.
Jason "Danthi" Whalley
inconsistent
the animation went from good to terrible from scene to scene. photoshop here and there, flash elsewhere. voices sounded like they were coming from a tin can. potential is there but even the story is poo.
It was my "real" attempt at Flash using Photoshop effects. I rushed it too quickly and it turned out crappy I have learned from this experience and I am taking time to create Crimson Moon #2 the best as I can. As for the story may get better it may not we will have to see.
I think that you gave me a fair review
Jason "Danthi" Whalley
nice artwork
but its slow and kinda boring
Ok that's fair.
Hopefuly you will check out CM#2 when it comes out and see if it is any better.
Jason "Danthi" Whalley
Not bad
That girl on the bus....for half the movie I was sitting there wondering if that was a guy or girl...
Ya it's a girl but in CM#2 she looks more like a girl it's much better art. Thanks for your review and the 7.
Jason "Danthi" Whalley