Reviews for Ghost Motel 3

[Kurt-Reznor]

Not bad, in fact I like it.

I think you really might be the only female on newgrounds who makes movies and who actually contributes to the portal and who really keeps up with everything. I give you major kudos for being a female writer, for writing a pretty decently intelligent story, and of course, for being a minority in this NG thing. The movie was good. Not great, but good. The artwork just doesn't seem to be original enough, and there were some parts that seemed to really drag on and on, making the story move too slowly. The voice quality wasn't so great either, but I'm not trying to insult you. I'm trying to tell you what you are doing wrong, so that you can use this advice to do better next time.

Violet-AIM responds:

Okay thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll do the best with what skills I have and try to improve where I can.

[Mikey18705]

It was alright

I think this would be great as a game but its good as a movie too.

[JeebsMcJeeb]

man i was hopin for more

i was thinkin that i was gonna get to do all the jobs, that would have been cool. it was funny when that girl got posesed though. she shot the acid stuff and her face turned dead ahahaa

Violet-AIM responds:

Well maybe he will get a chance to try out different jobs later. Thanks JeebsMcJeeb for reviewing. :)

[Sknot]

hey man

lawl u need to act i tell and hey man that part of working u no...demon hunter...haunt stuff is pretty awesome i hope the other world is like that : )
stay (sic)

[Coop]

Steepled in mystery

Not a bad continuation of the story here - I think that there may be one or two areas of the plot and the animation to work on, with perhaps a little better a flow for the pieces of writing. I know it's easier for some people to read, but changing the buttons to something resembling a play button, rather than a note stating "click this when you're done reading" would improve the flow and make it look less messy.

I think that the plot was good and it is developing the relationship between Joseph and Tabitha, while giving us a greater insight into what Joseph wants to get out of his death.

Still, as you go on making these, I'm sure that the animation will become easier to make and as the animation progresses, I'm sure that you will find easier ways to draw the characters and scenes.

I would have suggested a better approach to the music, with possibly a better selection of strings, to promote a more creepy atmosphere and while it was a little loud, compared to the vocals, but it didn't sound too bad, that's all I'm trying to say.

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Violet-AIM responds:

As for the music yeah, I understand but it was just something i felt needed to be there, thank you for the review.