Reviews for Ghost Motel 3

[Coop]

Steepled in mystery

Not a bad continuation of the story here - I think that there may be one or two areas of the plot and the animation to work on, with perhaps a little better a flow for the pieces of writing. I know it's easier for some people to read, but changing the buttons to something resembling a play button, rather than a note stating "click this when you're done reading" would improve the flow and make it look less messy.

I think that the plot was good and it is developing the relationship between Joseph and Tabitha, while giving us a greater insight into what Joseph wants to get out of his death.

Still, as you go on making these, I'm sure that the animation will become easier to make and as the animation progresses, I'm sure that you will find easier ways to draw the characters and scenes.

I would have suggested a better approach to the music, with possibly a better selection of strings, to promote a more creepy atmosphere and while it was a little loud, compared to the vocals, but it didn't sound too bad, that's all I'm trying to say.

[Review Request Club]

Violet-AIM responds:

As for the music yeah, I understand but it was just something i felt needed to be there, thank you for the review.

[Haggard]

Music is too loud

The different voice actors do a pretty good job here. Also most of the static noises are gone now. But the music is a tad bit too loud. It's also a bit annoying that it plays the whole time through. Music should only be played on special occasions, to place emphasis on a situation (ie play sad music when something sad happens, dramatic music to build up the tension, etc.).

I already noticed this in Part 2: You have some very nice references in your flashes. In part two it was the demon eating the corpse, which reminds me of that famous scene from Resident Evil 1. Here a little girl got possesed, which reminds me of the movie "The Exorcist". Hopefully I will notice some more references in the later episodes! :)

{ Review Request Club }

Violet-AIM responds:

Yeah we try and connect differant stuff from other episodes, As for the music yeah i know but i was really getting into it hehe.

[Fro]

A lot better!

Comments before actual review - A great improvement from the last two. Great job guys.

Animation/Graphics - Wow, much better than the last two episodes. The quality of the animation was much better and the drawings were much cleaner. Great job on improving these things in such a short amount of time between episodes.

Story/Content - A little less interactivity in these ones, but still a great job making sure there was something involved there. The story just keeps getting better and better. You guys did a really good job getting me involved in this series.

Audio - The voices were much better and much clearer. They weren't the same robotic dry voices that you used in the first two.

Overall - An amazing improvement from the first two to this one. I hope there is even more improvement to the next ones.

~ Review Request Club ~

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks yeah we have always read reviews from each movie/game and try to improve on those points as much as we can, we also before each episode sit down and go over each script and see how we can improve the writing portion of it all.

[Emby]

Well

The voice acting hasn't really improved... But this one is still pretty good. The great atmosphere's still there, that's also good. This one wasn't as great just because not much happened, but there is much more to come...!

[logan444]

I love it u should make more

awesome