Not bad in fact really good
Seems like you know what your doing. unlike most of the stuff I find on the recent list. Honestly I don't think its gonna stay on for long but seeing that you can probably make something that will stick and if you practice you could be a newgrounds classic. You definatly have talent. That was a really good short film good luck on NG!
One last thing I don't know what about this makes me wanna vote seven but it is a seven film. and same thing as last time it was a little corny drawing over sprites but its your first time and your still a lot better than me. Oh and if you fail at animating go be a annoying critic it really easy