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......Brilliant......
Not just because I'm a dbz fan, but because I'm a big fan of revenge. For your next, I think you should have kind of an "Iron Giant" approach. Ever seen that movie? You know, the misunderstood kind of thing. Make him like be flying away, to calm down or something. Then a bunch of cops find em, eh? then he uhh.. BLOWS UP ALL THE CARS! ....err...you know...something like it.
Guru K. D.