Not feeling this snare really. The slide notes at 1:22 are debatable. It just kind of sounds broken there.
Everything is nice, but the song is rather repetitive. The change in the end was nice, but the transition was super rough.
Buildups could have much more tension if it did not have as many tracks open at once (or had automation slowly opening up the leads' cutoffs. It should impact with more elements really, rather than already having so much in the build up and nothing to really shock you in the drop.
The melodies are good but like I said, there is not much variation. I think you had some much better tracks in the past overall. I just feel like the track's structure is not really effective with energy flow.
If you compared it to windfall, immortal flame, high score or unity, you can see that the choruses and drops have a lot of elements in the drops and much less in the build ups/verses. This kind of hurts my head because it feels like a constant drop throughout the whole track. The more dynamic a glitch hop track is, the better.
I know you did this in a day. But this needs work ;) keep it up.