Eh....
I was afraid to watch it with the sound up. *grin*
I read through the other reviews, and I have a couple tips:
If you're not ready for criticism, don't submit your movies. When you're putting it here for all to see, you're going to get some bad reviews. Don't respond to all of them with 'you're a dickhead' or something like that. Just...be ready for people giving you bad reviews.
Second...I don't have any movies here. Doesn't mean I can't make flash. If someone gives you criticism, creative or otherwise, don't judge their advice on whether or not they have flash movies on NG. They might be a pro elsewhere.
When you put something up for hundreds of people to see, you're going to get some shit. Learn to deal with it, or stop submitting stuff. Otherwise, you sound like an insulted baby when you get mouthy right back.