boooooooobs!
first of all i'd like to applaud your hand! i have a terrible time with hands and it doesnt appear that you erased a bunch, so bravo.
'finale' said something about the breasts being too big... that's horse puckey! they can never be too big! if anything they should be bigger! she appears to be a mage of some sort and they always have massive *ahem* assets.. that being said i have some thoughts. i see that her shoulder is behind the 'collar' for lack of better words. but the way you drew it makes her torso appear to be massive and slightly pushed the wrong way. also the pelvic bone appears to be a bit wonky. your head to body ratio seems pretty accurate at about 7.5 which means you naturally draw long leggy people.
however i really like your skull on the waistband and the detatched shoulder plate (astral armor?!) that looks like a parrots head. all in all i really like your style! keep it up!