so-so
well as much as i hate previews this was not so bad, love the backrounds though, but demos/trailers are just so tacky, but anyways, im not sure but is it france or french hehe ohwell....
Reviews for "Preview national"
Take the time you REALLY NEED to create the videos
Some french considerations first:
Ce video tiens quelque bonne chose, mais vous
devrez vous appliquer de plus sur un video apres
de le publier on Newgrounds - pardonnez-moi mon
frances... j'aie seulment voulu faire un resume
Back to English :)
I gave it a 2 (for what's my only vote is worth), because it doesn't deserve a Blam totally, but it doesn't deserve more than that either (in my opinion).
Before releasing anything on newgrounds, take the
time to do something of worthy quality!
I mean, put in more story, more effort. I know,
this is only a preview, but you could have given it
a little more work and it would have looked like
great, like a pro.
Check the grammar. If you aren't an english speaker
ask a friend or a teacher who is more proficient to
help you... usually good videos are made by 2 or
more persons.
Give it a pre-loader, even if it's a short video.
You don't know who is going to download it, either
he is on a DSL or on a 9600-bytes gsm phone...
Anyway, hope to see your next product.
Ciao.
I'm so gonna blam!
Okay, wonderful thing that spell check is eh? Coming doesn't have TWO M's! oh, and it's not really a preview if it doesn't say anything about what's going to happen... it might be a stick preview, but it still sucked. =P
LOL
Comming....for: USA... Canada.......French.
Looks alright
Just a few hints - the preview could of had a bit more detail regarding the story and also use spell check - (comming, coming)