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Reviews for "Lonesoul - Episode 1 - SE"

Rigged!!!

RIGGED!!! There are more votes then views!!!

adam-p89 responds:

What the hell are you talking about?
219 votes, 949 views, RIGGED MY ASS!

Not bad!

This has potential man! You've got an alright plot to work on, kinda like the Fugitive. Keep the voices, though you might want to put more .. emotion into them, they're not fitting exactly - but any voice is better than only subtitles I can't stand them, and I always want to give higher scores to those with thier own dialouge, they put more ass into it.
Different music would be good, though if not - this is better than nothing.
You've done a lot of work on shading, within the eyes and on the face due to his hair etc, which is pretty good, his first jump was very well done - I like the way you've improvised and worked well with images as background.
A bit more realism in movement in the next one would make this series amazing, so far it is looking quite good, keep it up!

Very cool

I didn't really mind the voices that much. The animation was really good and I'd love to see what happens next. The only thing that got to me was the song that was playing. It got on my nerves! Other than that, great job.

ok...

the voices annoy! and work on the main guys mishapen head lol. Great flash otherwise!

Nice work!!

I gotta say, I like this story already, and the graphics are really good. Work a little bit on the sound and you'll have a tried and true winner for episode 2. This is what we need to see more of on Newgrounds.