Well..
The kick is a little soft and 'pointy' and the clap is just total crap.
The build up isn't that good.
Maybe you should try using better samples.. I mean, the kick, the hats, the synths.. everything sounds just dull
But okay, maybe it's fun to listen once, because the overall track is pretty nice maybe.
I'm just giving you constructive critics here man, do something with it! :) You've got it in you! Keep it up
P.S Yeah, the clarity is pretty good! :)