Good story with a nice little tale to tell and a good ending too. Nice art and pleasant music too.
since this is linear with no choices really I think this probably would have been better suited in the Movies section perhaps.
Some minour issues. The text for some reason crawwwwwwls sloooooooly really sloooooowly when anyone talks. There are some transitions that could have used a little extra sentence like "you decide to explore while you have time" or "you head to the library at her advice." little things like that help with the sudden moves.
Great work and hope to see more of this.