Dude, this is actually really good. Here are some things that you could fix though!
The snare. It's too loud. It drowns out the bass a bit, especially in the second drop.
The ambience/background noise. I know I told you that you should have a lot of it, but I think that it goes on a bit to long in the beginning.
Other than that, I think this is an amazing track. Well done, Etz!
-Z