competent linework and composition
first, linework is pretty awesome.
composition wise, all pieces work together perfectly well.
proportions are aesthetically pleasing.
i found nothing to give constructive criticism to. hhmmm perhaps rendering it in color maybe.
anyway, good job. this would have been fun pen tooling in illustrator, i'm a bit jealous now.
all in all, fantastic illustration.
i do color some stuff, read further down and you'll know why, i don't always color stuff in,.....
Great Job!
In my opinion, I think this is one of the better drawings in gothic/dark art. But, it's also in a way a peaceful drawing? Mostly I just found it to look AWESOME.
awesome dude
very cool i love that thick line on the outside and the composition.
OMG
This is a very beautiful peace of art here. I could stare at it forever..........
i didn't realize how many people would see mt artwork on here,....or comment on them,,.......now i know,......................thanks for the compliment,......
Nice work.
Very lovely piece of work here. If you don't mint a little criticism read on. I'd love to see the piece colored. If you're gonna continue creating art with outlines I'd recomend the book "Hi-Fi Color for Comics" by Brian and Kristy Miller. As a B&W image there are some things that bother me. The grey box. For one everything else is black or white, and so it seems out of place. Also it's got pixel jaggies around the outside. If I knew what program you had used I could talk you through fixing this. Lastly there is a bit below the rose that is a lighter color grey than the rest.
I wouldn't have commented if I didn't think this piece was great. You've obviously got talent. I'd like to see you move toward a more finished piece.
thanks for the feedback,......and i appreciate the compliment, i finish alot of my work, ( color, etc. ), but am obsessed with outlining,......might be a downfall, but who cares, love what i do,...............................................................