Smooth and well done. I really like the character designs particularly. Well done!
Smooth and well done. I really like the character designs particularly. Well done!
Thank you JT! We put a lot of love and effort into them!
Could I be one of them. We should totally go on a double date ;)
Of course pika-mation! You're more than welcome to join in the fun! ;D
This was a cool animation I honestly maybe a tad bit longer...--Also I had a bit of trouble realizing the female was the female I feel like her hair should've been in a pony tail the whole time. Cool plot and it was funny- I do feel like she should have given him another chance and broke him out but in a good way. XD All in all that was a pretty cool and funny animation =).
Thanks for the review LaLaL00psy!
But I can see why you had a hard time recognizing our hero as a female because it is in fact a male character! It's a gay couple! We both gave them slight female characteristics and I think that that is what threw you of. (Not that boobs make a character female by instant, but you see the guy putting on a shirt in the very first scene, if it was a girl we would have given him a bra to wear!)
And, there was originally much more to the story. The animatic was 4 minutes long, but we had to cut it due to the deadline. But I am glad to hear you enjoyed it regardless! :)
I will upload the animatic to newgrounds as well later on!
~Curly
Nice Animation.
Thank you Arventos!
Interesting idea
And here you have an interesting idea I like that it's a reverse couple of characters and that makes it good I do have to say that you could make the animation a bit more smoother and maybe more texture and detail in the artwork itself and that's just a few ideas to help on improvments but anyways that's my input
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some smoother animation to start and more detail in art
~X~
Oh haha, it's been a while since someone responded on this. It feels like ages ago since I worked on this. Trust me, I improved a lot already! I am hoping to release a new movie soon! (around 2 to 3 months)
Thank you for your feedback however! I will keep it in mind!
~Curly