hmm.....
this sound entirly to close to the original or maybe it could be the original altho as i can see there is not really any originality put into this at all. try speeding it up and adding in your own sounds. if u want any ideas check out some of my stuff like [Sonic Slam] and my ice cap mixes. its hard to make a good mix of this cuz everyone has done it so its hard to come out on top.
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