to be honest keny, this is like all of your VN's . well thought out and well played out, though one thing you need is voice acting.
to be honest keny, this is like all of your VN's . well thought out and well played out, though one thing you need is voice acting.
Pretty good story, but why the useless jump scares?
The grammar definitely needs some work and I found the way the thoughts that you need to click jump around really annoying. Still, I found the story touching, so I enjoyed it.
it was ok.
Can you please move this into a different section? This is not a game. It's a visual novel.