Not bad, your animation style reminds me a lot of odd1sout which is by no means a bad thing, just thought I would point that out because I love his style of videos, too. Moreover, although it's not super fluid smooth animation, I still think stuff like this is always welcome on Newgrounds, welcome to Newground, dude can't wait to see more of your work :)
-Bow
Oh DAMN someone watched on the first day!
Thanks man! I wasn't too sure about NewGrounds earlier, but now that my content isn't completely garbage anymore, I thought now would be a good time to start. People on NewGrounds can be quite critical, and I don't find anything wrong with that. I just was never really good with criticism. But, now that I'm more open to it, I think I'm ready for it :D
Seriously, thanks a lot! :D
This was really good! I just wish the animation was just a bit more fluent. But other than that this is awesome! Keep up the great work dude!
Thank you very much! I'm definitely going to work on fluency a bit more soon, so let's just see where that goes lol.
Good work. I like your drawing style. I haven't seen many people that can make me laugh with this video format, so consider yourself one of the few. I noticed an odd effect where colours become slightly brighter when there is movement; seems like an unintended artifact from whatever software you used. Other than that the only issues I notice with this video is the sound qaultiy, there is a small amount of noticeable noise and microphone pops, but these are hard to avoid without a high quality mic. Hope you continue to upload here to Newgrounds.
I noticed the same thing with the lighting, but I couldn't do anything about it. I was curious to see if anyone would say anything, guess that answers that question XD
Thank you! The feedback is wonderful, and I've been meaning to get a better microphone as well. And, I think I'm gonna stick around on NewGrounds for a while, and see what happens ;D
nice animations and also the story seems creepy and you add in some humor which is cool too :^D
It is good for a beginner video.