when are you playing ROBLOX again?also good!
Reviews for "Orange Combat: Halloween day (Part 2)"
RagonFighter responds:
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Well this was entertaining but some things could be better like some extra "EFFECTS" and such, like the pumnkin heads eyes and mouth could glow more more brighter, The film was short, you should think about adding much more content, making it longer maybe if you dont want to go that rout you could add a combination of short films all together, almost like a portfolio of sorts, but you should do more then just have a really short toon and nothing else.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the pumnkin heads eyes and mouth could glow more more brighter, and this animation was way too short could be longer.
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That went pretty fast! I mean: short fight, but good pace too, very fast reaction times and attacks, though as always a few things to improve: the transitions, like when the pumpkin enters the screen after the other guy finds the sword (he doesn't 'walk in' on the scene, he just appears), the backgrounds (feel a bit rushed and detail-less), and the motions (are very linear - few twists, flips, etc, that'd feel natural for certain attacks). I feel the animation itself could look smoother too, to match the pace without giving the 'wobbly' impression when characters move, but overall it's really shaping up! The choreography looks good, and the pumpkin face at the end was a nice twist. :) Happy Halloween!
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Okay so one thing I noticed throughout your animations is that you always have your characters holding bladed weapons backwards and it's bugging the hell outta me. WHY?! Is this some Rurouni Kenshin shit?!?!!
Though you have definitely improved overtime...slowly....painfully.
Keep it up mang.
Woah there!