I found this game to be very cute! ^_^ But I think that the story could be further developed - so it doesn't and as a "I simply love her" story - and the excess of dot dot dot made the game loose a bit of rythmn (you could substitute it with vague descriptions of a situation,for example : today we had algebra class,luckily I'm really good at that and our teacher is really good...).
If you're thinking about making a bigger project out of that,more characters would also be really cool! Maybe you could choose who you want to fall in love with and this kind of thing....