it was like a kindergardeners cartoon
it was like a kindergardener wrote it with the crayon in his nose while the crayon was still in there horrable graphics horrable voice over and the worst script ever
it was like a kindergardeners cartoon
it was like a kindergardener wrote it with the crayon in his nose while the crayon was still in there horrable graphics horrable voice over and the worst script ever
Well...
Well.. I will give you credit for the drawings and the animation, that wasnt bad. But it wll sucked besides the part when she jumped up because of the mouse that was funny i guess. Otherwise there isnt any point to this. Sorry.
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no no and hell no........
Damn...go take a flash tutorial
Ok...this sucked. First of all, if you look at all the good flash cartoons, they are usually longer than ten seconds. Your animation was also very primative. I didn't like it at all.
Shadow Flare's Review
Note: I judge portal entries by the standards of today despite the date the submission was entered nor the experience the author had with flash at the time.
Graphics (9) - I thought they were pretty well done.
Style (7) - The plot was funny but it could have gone on longer.
Sound (10) - There was background music, sound effects, and dialogue that was easily understood.
Violence (0) - None
Interactivity (0) - None
Humor (6) - I thought it was pretty funny, but like I said before, it could have gone on longer.
Overall (8) - I average the scores that would count for this submission together and round the result up to give out fair scores. (graphics, style, sound, humor)
Extra Comment: I like waffles.