WHen's the full game coming out? Love it.
Reviews for "Jesse's big secret"
Honestly, it seems more depressing than interesting. The poor guy has everything bad happen to him and not even his own family helps him out or the production studio? Also, there are a lot of plot holes:
- There's a difference between being charged with an offense and having to serve jail time. Jesse didn't go to court over the offenses, one of which the airlines admittedly made a mistake.
- Most, if not all, security rooms are going to have security cameras, usually to make sure security officers are doing their jobs right and to verify what happened in the rooms. The footage would have shown that it was an accident.
- It's one thing to have the worst circumstances befall a character, but it should at least make sense. Why wouldn't Jesse be on the fly list and why wouldn't he be identified by the studio? The only explanations are that the assistant that gave him the tickets rigged these things because she wanted to get him in trouble (but how could she know the incident on the plane would happen?) or Jesse is insane and imagined the whole filming studio situation or the filming studio somehow set this up to make a live action series on a guy that gets sent to a women's prison to avoid getting raped while trying to hide the fact that he's a guy. This plot seems more like its unfolding as a porno rather than a legitimate story.
Also, the dialogue begins to become repetitive like the whole rape conversation in the jail cell. Sorry to be so negative, but I went into this with intrigue only to be kind of let down. Still, I wish you luck with the project.
game was pretty great, just wondering how far along you are on the gravity falls thing you are doing?
this was interesting and when a full or fuller version comes out I'm definitely going to play it
I loved the story, but it didn't feel too much like a game. It would be nice to add some interactivity and more choices. I felt like I was mostly just reading to find out what happened next in the story.