A mighty encounter! This was enchanting, and your distinctive style added greatly to the storytelling. Well done!
Reviews for "'Dog Box Collosseum'"
Butzbo responds:
Thanks Joe : D
Sound effects are very good with this great work
Butzbo responds:
Thanks dude!
I feel bad for not giving this a higher score. I was interested as to what this jam was even about. I am glad I now know. All I can say is that it seemed to work out pretty well. This cartoon does seem vaguely familiar to me. Maybe it was just another cartoon you made that I'm thinking of.
I think the animation was pretty good. I was kind of turned off by the lack of dialogue. It is something that will take getting used to. I'm still glad it's the highest of anything in this collection. I guess I'm just not a fan of these jams.
Butzbo responds:
Hmmm; I think it may seem similar to an earlier cartoon from 2013, 'The Fish Tower', it has a similar premise (some sort of adventurer wandering into an abandoned place); I actually thought of this one as some sort of spiritual successor since it's just a an idea that worked well for this theme of the jam.
And yeah, these jams are really cool for practicing, but it's sometimes necessary to have the context of these to properly judge them, since the level of polish or storytelling can vary a lot.
Now that you mention it, I should do dialogue at some point; As much as I enjoy the potential of telling a story without words, it could bring more possibilities and points of view to my shorts.
Thanks for reviewing! :)
This was great! I love how you worked with the sounds to make them not feel out of place! It all flowed together and told a fun story. As always, your stuff rocks! :)
Butzbo responds:
Whew; It was though to plan properly a cohesive way to use them, but I'm really glad it worked in some way at the end.
Thanks a lot man! :)
Could make for a good game, just sayin
Butzbo responds:
Ohhh; Some kind of "boss rush"/dungeon crawler/platformer would be a cool one to develop :o