A little something missing at the end, but not totally necessary - it concluded just fine without a hilarious joke. It wrapped up and told a story within the short amount of time. I'd say it was a success - and I really admire the humor used with the board breaking. that showed you workshopped or thought a little extra harder to produce a nice, tight comedic routine of your own.
Kudos, great job! Good luck with the rest of the competition! Especially you, dog!