SO AWESOME MAN
Reviews for "Gwain Saga - Chapter 001"
Great animation! The Hero's Journey is one of my favorite starting points, especially in fantasy escaping the real world stories. I love that the guy is not your typical disbeliever/jerky jock nor a wide eyed/fanboy finally getting his wish; he is a nice balance between the two.
I also like how the girl is strong at the beginning, yet not perfect, as her stupid mistake gets her into trouble. After that, she is strong again and shrugs as if to say "sorry for not telling you and, hey, mistakes happen, right?'
Furthermore, I liked how he was bold, but took NO KISS for an answer. The guy has a right to try, but I'm glad to see that he's respectful, as well! Excellent job, but there were some tiny mistakes. There were a few linguistic errors. Was that also Mario and Pokémon music? Try to at least re-tune it for a more "You" feel; gotta stand out, after all!
If you would like some help fixing the linguistic errors, then you may contact me here. I also have a close friend that can help with the music if you are interested.
All in all, this was a fun video. I am eagerly awaiting the second episode!
A great introduction to the series, awesome job!
Quite upsetting that this got taken down by some random company on YouTube. I mean, this works as a backup from YouTube, but even still, quite disappointing indeed.
love how you used a "Super Mario" song for when he was falling XD