damn i love your animations badly! <3
everything is neat and story line is touching. +w+
keep working on it \(0w0)/
Reviews for "Gwain Saga - Chapter 001"
loved the sound effects mixed with the storyline. The sound was a bit loud at some points but the sound choices were cool. I like how you didn't use vocals in this but rather took the style to simple sounds.
Smooth animations and thoughtful to the storyline.
Great animation! The Hero's Journey is one of my favorite starting points, especially in fantasy escaping the real world stories. I love that the guy is not your typical disbeliever/jerky jock nor a wide eyed/fanboy finally getting his wish; he is a nice balance between the two.
I also like how the girl is strong at the beginning, yet not perfect, as her stupid mistake gets her into trouble. After that, she is strong again and shrugs as if to say "sorry for not telling you and, hey, mistakes happen, right?'
Furthermore, I liked how he was bold, but took NO KISS for an answer. The guy has a right to try, but I'm glad to see that he's respectful, as well! Excellent job, but there were some tiny mistakes. There were a few linguistic errors. Was that also Mario and Pokémon music? Try to at least re-tune it for a more "You" feel; gotta stand out, after all!
If you would like some help fixing the linguistic errors, then you may contact me here. I also have a close friend that can help with the music if you are interested.
All in all, this was a fun video. I am eagerly awaiting the second episode!
I LOVE the constant humor here and there, some a lil cliche but works very well. I always love his lighthearted stuff too.
I love his reactions to everything as well, like the time he put the headband on and he's like...O_O
I would have liked him to cross that bridge with the shadow looming over him, have a close up sho at his face to see his OAO while opening his mouth in shock.
after saving her its very smart and cunning to make it look like a play stage while using the lights as rpg options
also hoping for more voice from the girl.
it's rare to find flash as good as this nowadays...as well as story telling. though it feels like there were a lil too many jokes or humor. But it didn't kill the episode so its ok.
can't tell you how spectacular this looks. It's almost like the story my friend came up with.
cuz twin characters almost seems a lil overused to an extent but eh..o_-
I can say that we can expect great things from your work!
Nothing but pure awesome. I've enjoyed your animation style ever since the first video I saw of yours, Splaturry. I've watched many if not all of your current library of animations since then, to include the Pilot of this series. Glad to see the first chapter of this project(I guess or series). I look forward to seeing more of it and your other works.