Not Bad
Well it was overall pretty good exept less humor (screw humor everything on newgrounds doesnt need humor) but i love the form of the story and the way u put it all together also it was ling instead of about 2 mins like most. yours was kinda like perfect kirby only no offence PK was alot better but urs is cool too.
Um.... another thing u should work on is if yer gonna use music from other games use a variety of songs not just the same one like u did with the alternate pokemon song from super samsh melee
but u did put the music in the right places in order to make it better like when kirby is chassing the little skull dude and king dee dee dee when u used the backround music from that captain falcon place also in super smash melee. also dont use so many sound effects from that game either exept kirby cuz come on who can sound like kirby. AND MOST OF ALL(yes i know im like that mean critque off amairican idol even tho im canadian) WORK ON THE VOICES THEY SOUND TOO........well they just dont fit the parts like king dee dee dee u would expect him to have a more duck like voice (im a bad explainer) BUT I LOVED THE SKULL DUDE VOICE hee hee but over all it was really good keep it up:).....phew wat a mouthfull