Quite decent maybe a bit sloppy but overall pretty okay.
Reviews for "One Day of Meursault"
I am not sure to whom you are paying respect and my review is based on this. I liked your attempt but I don't think that this is a project which is finished, wich is ready for viewing. You had elements that could help you develop a story and go somewhere with your animation but you seem to ignore them in purpose. So the whole thing lead to nowhere. I felt that you didn't want to make a point here, more like a moving picture. But then you left me with nothing to keep my interest. You have no story and you obviously didn't put a lot of effort nether in the artstyle or the animation itslef. Your video nedded more frames at times, maybe some details. Something. Am I right about the moving picture? Did you wanted to say something I didnt see?
Juilwey responds:
LOL you're quite true about the moving picture, because it does seem so. The animation is of some experiences and feelings of life, as a senior of university, right before stepping into society. Not a story-based animation, if you're looking for one. But still, thanks for all the review anyway, it's really great to have criticism sometime. Have to say that you must be a pro in the field, made some really sharp points XD