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Reviews for "Omega: Episode 1"

I agree with YetyMaster, a few scenes seemed a bit choppy even outside of the action and could use transitions or even a few more frames of animation to make them look smoother which can be time consuming but well worth it. In the conversation between the female character and "Omega" if its possible to do, add a little expression to the characters face so it doesn't seem like the lips are the only part on the face moving. And also the rapid angle jumping during the car(?) ride got a little confusing and became a major distraction from the scene.

Aside from animation the overall story and plot was pretty good and kept me engaged. A few recommendations I have for you are 1). You're creating a complex world and later on you'll have to explain it so be careful not to create information dumps (don't throw proper nouns at the audience) 2) The fact that both the "Omega" characters shared the color blue made it incredibly easy to guess what the call to action would be and in order to create a story that feels alive you may want to stray away from that and force the audience to guess at the plot points so that they feel invested in the story

Keep up the fantastic work friend

nice job mate, I don't know if what your using allows varied frame rates, but you might want to consider beefing it up in the action sequences, whether they are your big concern or not, they end up as a break in continuity(and therefore the viewer's engagement) of the show because the fps doesnt go up as the speed of events does, not even suggesting you to animate differently, i enjoy your animation just fine, but adding transition frames to your action sequences when its not too troublesome will go a long way to keeping the flow of your animations smooth.

This was really nice : j i enjoyed it alot. Keep up the good work.

love the art style but man it looks like the two main characters were ripped right out of a young justice episode.

JTmovie responds:

The artwork is very much inspired by Young Justice but yes Isabel (blonde haired girl) is way too close to that design; I'm going to change her look up a bit.

Super cool!
5 stars, man!