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Reviews for "Blank Ammo Pilot Episode"

I know what you mean

Noobs with their running into a base with a melee weapon. Also Noobs that kill their team because "friendly fire" is on. Next time add audio speech to enlighten the movie.

It wasn't horrible..

but you gotta put a little more detail into your work.. things like closing off the lines when you draw.. try using the hairline stroke instead of the default.. add a few gradients and a little shading.. that bunny hopping part, I'm sure you used either graphics or movie clips, but add some animation other than one frame.. it will help tremendously, make it look smoother and a little more professional. :-) theres some constructive criticism for ya

HybridHalo responds:

*Shakes DaDocta's hand*
I would say right now my drawing is better than my animation, I don't even call myself an animator, I'm just getting into frame by frame stuff and you're right, more time and more detal would benefit this movie. Problem is, this was cut short due to university work and so currently I have little time.
The Bunny hoppers as i quote "They look like rabbits" *chuckles* that's the idea whoever wrote that review ;) I would have made some kind of primitive hip movement if I'd had the time.
Thankyou for you much appreciated review.
-Matt

wat the hell...

wat waz all da CS shit about,ep.2 betta b betta dan dat shit

HybridHalo responds:

This review is also available in english at www.babelfish.com...

Better do something about there walking...

They looked like rabbits.

To short and bitter...

Not good.