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Reviews for "Arc Infinitum 3"

Pretty good honestly, good animation if a bit janky. The main problem honestly is the level of contrast blends shades of black in the characters and backgrounds tend to blend together sometimes, making it harder to figure out what's going on.

Cool animation, nice job :) The character's motions seemed a little unnatural at times and I feel like the visuals could use a lot more work, but overall I think this has a lot of potential to develop into something very interesting. I'm not terribly familiar with 3d animation but I can imagine that it's considerably more difficult than traditional 2d animation, so props to you on that front. My suggestions are:

* Work on the character motions - make them a little more fluid and natural.

* Add a little more emotion (there were some scenes where the characters seemed unnaturally expressionless)

* Work on the art and throw in some more cinematics. There is definitely a lot of room for improvement on this front. Could use more detailed textures, backgrounds, etc. It feels like some of the scenes in this animation were too close together. Add some cinematic, transitional sequences inbetween them to add a little more depth to the story. Would be really cool to see an intro sequence like the one in the original GITS. I'd recommend checking out the movie "Blade Runner" for some additional inspiration.

Overall I thought this was pretty cool, so good job. Definitely a lot of potential here. 4/5.

So Epicl!!!!!!!!!!!

Boring.

I'll give you 2.5 stars because 3D I know modelling and animation aren't particularly easy (not particularly hard either) and what you have done is fairly passable and because it would have taken its time and effort, even if it looks like RWBY. I'll give you another half star because the voice overs are rather clean. Bluntly... the writing is generic, full of anime cliches and contains things that are really there because "cool" rather than make sense. Don't get me wrong, this kind of shit totally has a sizeable fanbase (otakus) and I predict you'll get a lot of instant 5 stars. You should do better, though, unless you were aiming for a safe video. Also, I don't know why you opt for such a low frame-rate in all your videos. It's a bit jarring.

(To your credit, RWBY has like a company behind it and it's only marginally better than your 1 person project. Take it in as you will.)