I was hoping you would improve with time
Wow, an actual attempt at humor. Mind you, not much of an attempt, but deserving of a 1 at least. I was even more suprised not of the fact that you attempted a plot (I was expecting it) but how poor the attempt was. A tiny little crumb of info - "It's a doll, it's not a doll?! Who knows?!" And the science fiction-ish feel to the "Crypt Cream" just makes me think of Grade B sci-fi horror movies. Maybe that's the effect you were going for, but I personally find it tacky. Also - Keep with the old movie theme if that's what you're going to start with - For attempting a movie of this "quality" continuity errors are bad. Here's to hoping the next one is better.