While this wasn't the worst game I've ever played there's still a lot you could improve. Firstly it seems pretty glitchy I clicked on part one and was sent to part 2 fan art instead and the presentation isn't the best with the menus looking pretty crappy (Pardon my language) due to the stock images and fonts that give the impression they were slapped on without care. I can tell you put effort into this but it needs to be more polished. I like the concept and it wasn't executed horribly here but it could be done a lot better. At the moment its below average but with more work I believe this game could become a lot more I hope you don't give up on it.