FeatherCock you chicken fucker!
You(FeatherCock), and the rest of those morons that call themselves the Clock Crew have submitted so much crap on Newgrounds you're a bloody hypocrite(do you know what that means) to slam this movie. Rvyn don't listen to these Fruit of the Loom rip-offs! You did a good job on this movie, graphics, style and especially storyline. FeatherCock is just pissed because no one was shot. Filter out the morons Rvyn.
Yawn
This would had to of been the most boring waste of time in my life ever. I just feel sorry that you had to waste more of your life making and writing a shit build up to what was a shit flash movie that i stupid half way through...(i think i fell asleep on the stop button).
Hmm, artistic I guess?
Well, I'm glad at least some people are trying to be artistic. Don't forget though, that art is nothing without meaning. This movie had very little meaning to me, it was sparse, assuming, and poorly constructed. So ok, I guy is invisioning what his trip will be like, that's not much of a subject for art. However, say that it were for an instant, and just for the sake of arguement let's say that you captured it well. You are still lacking substance, with no humor, no action, no plot, no drama, no interaction, and "poor" meaning, that is all you are left with, a "poor" movie. I admire your effort and your talent, you are quite a good drawer. Next time you want to create something like this, try matching yourself up with an equally talented writer. Also, just some friendly advice, don't tell people that they need to "grow up" on your author comments, it doesn't make for constructive criticism. I have found that it's not that everyone on Newgrounds is a little child that can't understand simple metaphors, far from it, most viewers are quite intelligent and mature when they want to be. However, I, like many others don't log onto Newgrounds instead of going to a museum. I am not here for the art, I am here for the simple entertainment, a joke, a little game, a song, whatever it may be. So next time you are feeling artistic, why not paint something and send it to an art expo, you'll find a more receptive audience there, and a substantial amount of money. Good luck.
well well well..
i must say...nice style. humor makes the world go round but this had a great feeling to it. this is the first time i saw a really good use of the "loop" feature in flash...props. i think this film was put together really well....the only criticism i have is that i dont really like the color use of the girl at first...i think since you have everything else in outline...she should be simpler than the two color blocks. the red is way too much compared to the rest of the film. but overall i liked it...it made me feel chill inside. good work.
Great flick!!
One word: cinematography. Just like you said. This is very moody, very artistic, and unlike many portal entries, this has CLASS. Keep up