That was Great!
That was so good! Wow! I would just place that on a TV on a other show. That people are watching it. My show will maybe go like this.
One of my shows:
(Poncho and Mac watching the Spatula City comercial)
Poncho: That it! I know how I can make up with Roxi! I will buy her a spatula!
Mac: What? Buy her a spatula? That the most craziest idea ever!
Poncho: I try every thing else. What else can to do?
Mac: Oh! Go on and do it I know you want to.
Poncho: Ok here I go to Spatula City!
(one day later)
(Mac and John watching the Spatula City comercial)
Mac: Man! How a spatula helped Poncho and Roxi make up?
John: Because spatulas are so cool! I have 8 of them at home!
Mac: I think every one in this City is nuts.
(John is walk to the door.)
Mac: Where you going?
John: I'm goto Spatula City! To buy some spatulas.
Mac: Thats it I'm moving out of this City!
(The End)
Well maybe you will see it. Well any way Great job!