I really love this game, it's just so fun. But there are a couple things though that I want to point out.
- after a certain point in the game it stopped showing the comments after uploading a video.
- it wouldn't let me buy my house for several days even though I had the money.
Also I would really love it if you could buy other things in the store other than just upgrades. Like maybe a pet and some pet food or something so that way your money won't just stack up and only have to pay bills. Other that that, its a really good game. :)
Reviews for "Life as an Internet Star"
Zayru13 responds:
Thanks for the catches on the bugs, They should be fixed within the next few minutes.
The game is okay.
I think you could add more game mechanics to improve the game. And also add more items to purchase. But it's a solid game. But it needs something to make it more attractive and people enjoy it longer.
The game's quite interesting, and really well made. Personally, I feel that you should add a few spelling errors to the comments, and every once in a while, just one "Were your eyes closed when you typed this?" comment to simulate actual YouTube comments-- every comment being perfectly made is nice to see, but it doesn't capture the real YouTube comment section.
It's an alright game it needs some work it's pretty easy to spam the collaboration to pick up all the fans and money you need to max your upgrades. I think it'd be a good idea to adjust the payoff and make a possible failure rate as well, also there's no real way to damage your fanbase so possibly making it like to lose fans would be good as well. overall not too bad though
Zayru13 responds:
I'll adjust it a bit, nice ideas and thanks for the feedback.
It's an alright simulator.
It has a message of sorts on internet fame and such-- I like that.
GAMEPLAY
+ Works well, mechanics have patterns.
- Unrealistic in a way.
WRITING
- Unrealistic. Even the comments the guy gets are too nice for YouTube.
+ Has a message of sorts.
MUSIC
+ Nice and looping well. Catchy and ambient.
- No other tracks, it seems.
GRAPHICS
+ Looks good enough, it isn't too sloppy.
- Alignment issues with the button text and other graphics.
AESTHETICS
+ Fits well enough for this sort of game.
Zayru13 responds:
Thanks for the great input. I see a lot of your points and agree with them pretty well, I'm not a great programmer so I did what I could and tried to make it easy overall. The comments I completely understand as well, but I wanted to make it so anyone could play it and if I went realistic on the comments, holy crap this would be rated Mature. Again, thanks for the input. I am continuing to update based on feedback and will do so from yours as well.