A quick witted bundle of what will happen next here.Sometimes the scenes flash to quick and you do not have time to read the writing you are supposed to have read and it takes a while for the jokes to get funny but we are left with a great cliffhanger at the end!"Did he or didnt he!?" that is the question;).Some beautiful illustrations here as well.All round good job and i will be waiting for episode 2 so i think 3 and a half stars should suffice.
Reviews for "DSYPTOBH ep1"
It was a great effort all round, but I feel the animation (at least in some of the 2-sentence segments) could've been more polished and fluid. At times it just felt like stills with minimal movement, and when there was animation, it was stilted and the styles were inconsistent from one to the other. (sometimes within the same story, the same shot of the dude would look different from a higher or lower angle/different lighting/drawing style. (Also, why some guys with glasses, some with beards...it was jumpy, etc.)
Also the transitions/jumping around the frames in between the two sentence stories took me out of the narrative, why the black screens in between? You could've brought close to each story much more effectively that allowed it to flow better, the black screens are just jarring, as if there are frames missing. I did like the two sentence horror stories though, some of them really caught me off guard how well they were written. And the end bit with the voice actor was cute. "Help me...I'm trappe-" EXPLOSION. Great effort all around from all those who worked on this but I feel like the animation and editing/animating could've been much stronger in this.
SPANGLESNG responds:
Yeah i agree. I could have done better so I'll do it better in the next animation video. Thanks, i could animate more better quality, if i have more time than my job, looking forward getting better pc and drawing tablet. The guys you asked why with the glasses and beards they are real, no depiction. The black screen transition i thought it might be nice, so yeah, too bad you didn't like it :\. Yeah thanks, i did my effort i could and i wish i could have done better so i do i'll keep practicing for next. Thank you.