The Venture Bros.
Reviews for "Unusual Creation"
Most brony things I shy away from, but this was tastefully done. Really, makes me take notice. Are you going to do more? Oh please do...would love to see more of this kind of redubbing going on. Yeah might be a cheap laugh and some would say hardly art, but it is great to refine skills. And yeah a good laugh.
Hehehehee... orphans...
It would've worked with starting at "It's hungry, it craves purity, it devours purity! It sings to me..." but this is great :3
Looked very nice and was funny. Good animation of the words being spoken, I felt like I could read their lips if I had to. The only thing I didn't care for was actually your intro. It would be better if you didn't call your own work a "pos". It feels a little bit disrespectful to upload your animation to a site that is community judged and then call your own work a piece of shit. If you think that your project is that bad then maybe you shouldn't show it at all. I think you were just afraid of rejection and it is difficult to expose your work to criticism. That is perfectly natural and normal. Maybe next time you could leave the self depreciating comments out and just let everyone know perhaps that you are interested in peoples constructive criticism. You could even mention that you are not sure what to think of your project and so welcome help Tell us some of the things you feel you need to work on and ask us if we noticed, I think you'll find that you are your own harshest critic :) This was a well done work in every other way. Keep up the good work.
EngelBV responds:
I'll definately say that there are some parts to the animation that could have been improved, but I don't believe it to be all bad as I described. I guess you could say I have a strange sense of humour, because I call everything I create garbage, or in this case 'a piece of shit'. As you might tell by my nearly empty profile, I'm quite new to the Newgrounds community, and I'm not entirely sure how people will react to things.
But nonetheless, thanks for your honest input.
Almost like one of those podcast segments with animations to go with them, probably because it all ends so abruptly, textual intro but no textual credit! Large amounts of horse-like characters lol, not the type of content I usually watch, but it was entertaining! Nice work.
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