I don't really know what to say about this. I would give my best critical reviews but I've seen some reviewers on here giving themselves their best opinions but ends up becoming insulting. All i can say, Is that You need to improve a bit more on dialogue. The Art-style is something you can't do much about but recommend you practice. This is nice for a first game but I kind of was drawn away from it, I don't know why. I would give myself all of my opinions but....I'm slightly afraid to.
Reviews for "Infinite School Trouble"
Good start! Keep at it!
Well...All the characters and backgrounds came from IS: Infinite Stratos, an Anime. No originality for them but you have originality in dialogues only. 2.5, because IS: InfiniteStratos is a Harem Anime so I gave it 2.5 and Harem is my favorite.
I get that its your first game ever made, but I think you might have went too big on your promises with you claimed to make. I think it was interesting, and if it had a larger storyline and some improved dialogue it would make for an enjoyable story. But try not to promise more than you make ok?
Still enjoyed playing it, and applaud you for your efforts. Don't let criticism keep you from trying again to work on projects! You could always expand on this one as well!
nabylsoft responds:
Thank you for your feedback. I'll try to improve more on my next game.
I'm usually not so harsh on games but I have to be in this case. The story is not interesting at all. Its super boring. Second the multiple choice doesn't really affect the game at all. You say that there is interesting gameplay but there really isn't any gameplay. The dialogue sounds like it was a fanfiction written by a 13 year old. The characters are not interesting at all and neither are the backgrounds. The game itself was bad enough but lying in the description to get people to play is pretty low. There seemed to be little effort put into this game at all.
nabylsoft responds:
It's my first game ever made. It's more like a test run on the game software so that I can get familiar with it before making an actual game. It seems like you wanna let me down with the insults. But guess what, you can keep on insulting while I'll keep on publishing games. HAHAHA. YEAH BABY!!!