Joel: That was beautiful let's have sex in the next video
Reviews for "TLOU - Ellie Sings"
First, I can tell that this is not supposed to be some huge undertaking. It's a nice little thing you did. None of this is meant to be damning or saying 'you failed' to do what you set out to accomplish.
Her arms look a little short from the side. The closeup shows her face at an angle with both eyes visible, but the nose and mouth still have that sideview thing going on. She does a little too much wiggling around with her body for someone maintaining posture for playing guitar. It's hard to miss that her fretting hand doesn't fret, either. The rhythmic slow-clap seemed to teeter between awkward and sarcastic, and the hand shadows came together stiff as boards. The shirt lines are good enough for detail, but they just stop at the bottom where the thighs begin, as if it turns into a leotard. Loose shirts crease and slump at the bottom in a sitting position.
Someone's clapping for her, so she's performing, and the clapping implies that they're in the mood to hear her play something nice, not that she's playing a song for someone feeling down. Her frown is subtly changed to a smile, but her eyebrows frown even more. That dip in their shape shouldn't form, not unless there's a reason why her mood might be torn between sad and proud/empathetic.
I appreciate the thinly drawn lines that add a little more to an otherwise spartan drawing, and the amount of detail you put into the guitar is noteworthy. The slight blur of the background around her minus the bed is also a nice touch.
Seeing Joel clap at the end gets me every time. Terrific work. :,)
hey this Is really good! im from new Orleans to~
Nice video <3