good writing
the dialog i thought was really weak til RUHN actually appeared. he had some funny things to say. good writing with him. incorporate more of that in your future work. its funny stuff. story line seems week. typical vigilante hero kills and questions. you see it in all dark comics usually. but i like where you are going! please stick with it. good luck, hope to see more in the future
Well done.
Good job, I'm looking forward to the series, it could be interesting. The graphics, well... they were not bad, but they still need some improvement. Anyway, I liked it!
Kind of funny.
Not bad. The animation is lacky. I didn't laugh all that much.
Very Good
The graphic although not the best where very well done. The script writing for this tho was the best! the story might not be that origonal. But the one-liners in this are hillarious. Heck my rommate almost choked to death laughing(literally). GOOD JOB.
Nice
I liked it. Good story, and some parts made me laugh. But, you should try to improve your graphics a bit. Other than that, it's really good. Looking forward to the next one.