Reviews for Freddy's Lament

[RevRun14]

A very good start to a series. I also think your theories are interesting as it's a "minority" theory from what I've seen. Have you seen this video on Youtube ?
Game Theory: FNAF 2, Gaming's Scariest Story SOLVED!
Theories like this one seem to be the most common. Either way, seeing new theories and seeing people present them regardless of the what is in the "main stream" is always refreshing.

I took off 0.5 stars because it's too short. I can understand doing smaller clips, but I mean that it's too short to really have an "atmosphere" for me. Maybe allowing more time to let the atmosphere sink in before moving on. The piece with Freddy and The Puppet is good, but have Freddy become slowly fearful of it. For example, as The Puppet is coming up the hallway, have Freddy open his eyes slowly at first and then finish quickly as The Puppet is by the door. Freddy can then become over come in fear slowly. It would add on time, but for me it's the only thing keeping me from giving it a full 5. However, that just me and my stars are biased based on what I find truly perfect. This mostly comes from my taste of horror and thriller games and movies.

Overall, I really do like it even if it's not the usual length that I'm a fan of and I couldn't get all of the atmosphere that I want. It's always great to see new people and new stuff on the site.

[Milantique]

I'm a bit confused on the story but I am very creepy out, great job

skylegend01 responds:

I still have a few more shorts that go with this one and they will flesh out the story a bit more but thanks for the compliment!

[DEicED]

I liked it , but why not to make a cartoon of the original story ? instead of making some wierd one.( SPOILER ALERT AHEAD) 3 children were murdered and stuffed into the costumes. And golden freddy is the guy that talked on the phone.

skylegend01 responds:

Basically I wanted the cartoon to follow the kids who were stuffed in the suits and basically create my own version of how they ended up that way.

[weta]

interesting hope to see more good animation design and story

[mrspock1510]

You really need to remove that subscribe buttom. If you're going for horror never put anything distracting in the video unless it enhances the horror. My eyes would regularly go to it during your video, breaking my imersion and enjoyment of a pretty great piece of work. So please let the work speak for itself cause your just hurting the product, the experience and your viewers.

skylegend01 responds:

I will look into it I like to have something to show my channel since I have found my work on many other sites besides Youtube and newgrounds. I will definitely try to figure out a way to make it less noticeable and may remove it. I appreciate the input.