I have no idea what problem "hunting prey" has with this, I guess the doofus has never been in combat before and does not understand her head is more than likely in a leaning in a forward position towards her target. This is truly a masterpiece of warfare, also it kinds reminds me of me beloved Sabrina, I know I am a lucky bastard.
In closing my only suggestion is to make her face smaller by a 6th of it's size. In closing I love your work!