Not bad. From a technical perspective, it's pretty polished. I thought the voice acting was pretty decent, too. I just didn't find it to be very funny. Not to say it wasn't entertaining (it somewhat was), just not comedic. Still, good job.
Reviews for "Five Nights Of Cuteness"
DarkStar7421 responds:
Thanks :P
This is awesome!
I think his has both of his arms though.
DarkStar7421 responds:
Thanks i'm glad you liked it! And I thought so too but he actually doesnt its just a bunch of wires x)
This was pretty alright. Good set-up and it didn't drag its feet getting to the punchline. Passable art.
I personally thought the voice-acting to be adequate and the lines well-delivered. It was nice to see it sync well with the mouth animation.
My suggestions:
-Work a bit more on your backgrounds. I'm not sure what your exact level of artistic ability is but I feel that if you spent more time on them we'd see a rise in quality.
-Do a bit more with your characters. As is, they're props with moving mouths. I know that occasionally they move but... not really? A few tricks are used to make them look less static but I wish more was done to take advantage of the medium.
-I'm on the fence about including this point because comedy is very subjective! And many people have clearly found this very amusing. But I found the funny here to be a little lacking. In fact, it felt a little bit like a stock joke cut and pasted into the context of Five Nights at Freddy's 2.
Anyway, well done.
DarkStar7421 responds:
Thanks for the advice I really appreciate it. :)
Saying "Screw you" in a E rated animation, beautifal
DarkStar7421 responds:
xD oops!
not gonna lie. that was in no way funny. and your voice is really really annoying. you need to get a voice actor you sound like a 12 year old. grats on the front page i guess. apparently enough people are easily amused enough to enjoy it.