Getting better, but....
This has had more potential than most of your other works. However, although I can overlook amature art, since I'm certainly no artiste myself, you have to trade that kind of quality off against something else. If your art sucks, balance it off with a real shit-fire comedic hook or awesome sound & effects to make up the lack. Your entry had the beginnings of that, but the cat thing went on too long, and the overall point of the piece was, well, non-existant as far as I could see... Overall, a 4 for your improvements here.